Correct grammatical mistakes in an english manpage.

Submitted by:	mrakm

1 files changed, 80 insertions, 27 deletions

diff --git a/sysutils/libretto-config/files/patch-ad b/sysutils/libretto-config/files/patch-ad
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--- a/sysutils/libretto-config/files/patch-ad
+++ b/sysutils/libretto-config/files/patch-ad
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
---- libapm-e.man.orig	Fri Jun 19 12:02:48 1998
-+++ libapm-e.man	Thu Nov 26 12:38:56 1998
-@@ -1,73 +1,73 @@
+--- libapm-e.man.orig	Fri Jun 19 04:02:48 1998
++++ libapm-e.man	Thu Aug  2 17:34:01 2001
+@@ -1,80 +1,98 @@
  .\" Written Tue May 12 19:30:00 1998 by ISHIOKA Takashi
  .\" (ishioka@ppp01.infopepper.or.jp )
 -.TH libapm l "" "TOSHIBA Libretto only"  ""
@@ -38,64 +38,117 @@
  
  .SH DESCRIPTION
 -.B libapm
+-configures the setting of Toshiba Libretto.
 +.B libretto-config
- configures the setting of Toshiba Libretto.
++configures the BIOS settings of a Toshiba Libretto notebook computer.
  Changes are done immediately and rebooting is not neccesary.
  
  .SH OPTIONS
  .TP
 -.B \-P,\-\-PowerUp (boot,hibernation)
+-sets the Hibernation function.
+-If hibernation is specified, the hibernation function is enabled.
+-If boot is specified, it is disabled.
 +.B \-P (boot,hibernation)
- sets the Hibernation function.
- If hibernation is specified, the hibernation function is enabled.
- If boot is specified, it is disabled.
++sets Hibernation mode.
++The ``boot'' argument disables hibernation.
++Hibernation mode writes volatile memory
++to disk at power off.
++Without hibernation,
++the Libretto's power-down actions are destructive;
++there is no saving of machine state.
  .TP 
 -.B \-T,\-\-StandbyTime (0,5,10,15,30,45,60)
+-sets the Standby time.
+-If the Stanby time is specified, the power is not cut after hibernation
+-for that time in order to resume quickly from hibernation.
+-You can select the time from 0, 5, 10, 15, 30, 45, 60 minutes.
+-This function is valid if the hibernation function is enabled.
 +.B \-T (0,5,10,15,30,45,60)
- sets the Standby time.
- If the Stanby time is specified, the power is not cut after hibernation
- for that time in order to resume quickly from hibernation.
- You can select the time from 0, 5, 10, 15, 30, 45, 60 minutes.
- This function is valid if the hibernation function is enabled.
++sets a Standby Time.
++If a standby time is specified,
++power is not cut after hibernation
++for the specified time
++to allow a quick resume.
++A time of 0, 5, 10, 15, 30, 45 or 60 minutes
++may be selected.
  .TP
 -.B \-a,\-\-AutoOff (disable,10,20,30,40,50,60)
+-sets the time to the Auto Power Off.
+-You can select the time from disable, 10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60 minutes.
+-This function is valid if the hibernation function is enabled.
 +.B \-a (disable,10,20,30,40,50,60)
- sets the time to the Auto Power Off.
- You can select the time from disable, 10, 20, 30, 40, 50, 60 minutes.
- This function is valid if the hibernation function is enabled.
++sets the time to Auto Power Off.
++A time of 10, 20, 30, 40, 50 or 60 minutes
++may be selected,
++or the word ``disabled'' may be used
++if Auto Power Off is not needed.
  .TP
 -.B \-S,\-\-PanelSwitch (disable,enable)
+-sets the Panel Switch funtion. If enabled, hibernation is done by 
+-closing the panel and vice versa.
+-This function is valid if the hibernation function is enabled.
 +.B \-S (disable,enable)
- sets the Panel Switch funtion. If enabled, hibernation is done by 
- closing the panel and vice versa.
- This function is valid if the hibernation function is enabled.
++sets the Panel Switch function.
++If enabled,
++hibernation or power-down may be done
++by closing the front panel
++and the machine may be restarted
++by opening it.
  .TP
 -.B \-A,\-\-PowerOn (disable,<time>)
+-sets the Power On timer.
+-The format of the <time> is hh:mm. If time is specified, power is 
+-automatically turned on at the time. 
 +.B \-A (disable,<time>)
- sets the Power On timer.
- The format of the <time> is hh:mm. If time is specified, power is 
- automatically turned on at the time. 
++sets the Power On Timer.
++If <time> is specified,
++power is automatically turned on
++at that time. 
++The format of the <time> is hh:mm,
++and a value of ``disable''
++turns off the power on timer.
  .TP
 -.B \-L,\-\-LcdPower (0,1,2,3)
+-sets the brightness of the LCD.
+-0 is the darkest and 3 is the brightest.
 +.B \-L (0,1,2,3)
- sets the brightness of the LCD.
- 0 is the darkest and 3 is the brightest.
++sets the brightness of the display LCD.
++0 is the dimmest and 3 is the brightest.
  .TP
 -.B \-V,\-\-Volume (0,1,2,3)
+-sets the volume of beep sound.
+-0 is off, 1 is minimum and 3 is maximum.
 +.B \-V (0,1,2,3)
- sets the volume of beep sound.
- 0 is off, 1 is minimum and 3 is maximum.
++sets the volume of keyboard bell (system speaker).
++0 is off, 1 is quietest and 3 is loudest.
  .TP
 -.B \-O,\-\-Off (suspend|hibernation)
+-sets the suspend/hibernation mode. (100CT Only)
 +.B \-O (suspend|hibernation)
- sets the suspend/hibernation mode. (100CT Only)
++sets the suspend/hibernation mode. (100CT/110CT Only)
  .TP
 -.B \-v,\-\-Version 
 +.B \-v
  displays the version of this program.
  .TP
 -.B \-h,\-\-Help 
+-displays the simple usage.
 +.B \-h
- displays the simple usage.
++displays a simple usage message.
++
++.SH NOTES
++This program has no warranty at all.
++It may or may not contain bugs.
  
  .SH BUGS
+-Completely no warranty. It may or may not contain any bugs.
+-Operation on the machines but Toshiba Libretto is uncertain.
+-A part of function might work on Toshiba's other notebook machines.
+-You must have root privilege to run this program.
++Operation on any machines except Toshiba Libretto is unknown.
++Operation on other Toshiba notebook computer is uncertain.
++Superuser privelige is required to use this program.
+ 
+ .SH AUTHORS
+ .TP