Correct english grammar

Submitted by:	Adam Steffes <asteffes@netmug.org>

25 files changed, 75 insertions, 100 deletions

diff --git a/editors/openoffice-1.0/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-1.0/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-1.0/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-1.0/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice-1.1-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-1.1-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-1.1-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-1.1-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice-1.1/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-1.1/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-1.1/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-1.1/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice-2.0-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-2.0-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-2.0-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-2.0-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice-3-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-3-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-3-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-3-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice-3/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-3/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-3/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-3/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-1.0/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-1.0/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-1.0/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-1.0/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-1.1-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-1.1-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-1.1-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-1.1-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-1.1/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-1.1/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-1.1/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-1.1/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-2-RC/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-2-RC/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-2-RC/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-2-RC/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-2-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-2-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-2-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-2-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-2.0-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-2.0-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-2.0-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-2.0-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-2.0/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-2.0/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-2.0/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-2.0/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-2/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-2/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-2/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-2/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-3-RC/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-3-RC/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-3-RC/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-3-RC/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-3-devel/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-3-devel/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-3-devel/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-3-devel/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-3/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-3/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-3/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-3/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice.org-vcltesttool/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice.org-vcltesttool/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice.org-vcltesttool/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice.org-vcltesttool/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/openoffice/pkg-message b/editors/openoffice/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/openoffice/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/openoffice/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/staroffice5/pkg-message b/editors/staroffice5/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/staroffice5/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/staroffice5/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/staroffice52/pkg-message b/editors/staroffice52/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/staroffice52/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/staroffice52/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/staroffice60/pkg-message b/editors/staroffice60/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/staroffice60/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/staroffice60/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/editors/staroffice70/pkg-message b/editors/staroffice70/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/editors/staroffice70/pkg-message
+++ b/editors/staroffice70/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck
 
diff --git a/german/staroffice70/pkg-message b/german/staroffice70/pkg-message
index dc497fd93b79..6f8a7247f06f 100644
--- a/german/staroffice70/pkg-message
+++ b/german/staroffice70/pkg-message
@@ -4,10 +4,9 @@ Written By:
 Darren Wiebe
 dkwiebe@hagenhomes.com
 
-You will very shortly be done a network install of StarOffice 5.1a.
-Once that is done exit X11 and run it again as the user that you usually use.
-Then run "make install-user" and do a standard workstation install.
-It will now be ready to use.
+Make install will preform a network installation of StarOffice 5.1a.
+Once that is done, run make install-user, as the user you usually login
+as and do a standard workstation install.  It will now be ready to use.
 
 Good Luck